Magic Man

i'll be quick. basically I need to get a little bit of stimulus for a deep love song or poem. Can anyone please hel me out???

I thought this was pretty good but it should either go somewhere in terms of a plot or introduce other characters like the nose,ears, cheeks, mouth I don't really know ...

The dialogue and wording, I thought ws a bit messy and needed to be cleaned up, it should also be made a bit more comedic.

you probably couldn't give a toss, but I reckon you should make it a comedy poem because with this poem you could. But i still love it and can totally ...

Just posting to ask you guys to post any and every picture of any and every style of guard you can find Your help would be very much appreciated.

I loathe twilight, because of SM the vampire and were wolf theme has now been destroyed by the fanfic and idea stealers. Also if you're going to write a vampire ...

I think no. 1 sounds good but probably won't get to 50, 000 words, however I think you should write it anyway. With idea no. 2 I think the whole ...

Lately I've been having a lot of trouble motivating myself to actually start writing, I have ideas it's just that I am having some trouble JUST GETTING STARTED because starting ...

I think the story is great, however I think in the fast-passed parts, don't use to many adjectives because to a normal reader they start to A) not read the ...

Just two things: firstly in the first paragraph you said rite instead of right and secondly I think you should build up more suspense at the end of the passage. ...

Lately I've been wondering about cliches, so I've decided to get your help. Just post your own list of what you think are cliched plots, story-lines, powers, technology, settings, characters ...

I think it is very much like the Hunger Games, but maybe you should just change certain parts to make it less similar to the Hunger Games, I can't think ...

I reckon that's a great idea, very interesting, it would put a lighter, less sad veiw on war

Hero,I don't really get what you're saying with the pyro idea, please explain. also bickazer I don't actually know about the Flash family and could you give an example of ...

I have got two story ideas. Please give feedback, opinion, plot or story changes or tips. Warning I have a certain fixation on super powers. First: A boy is the ...